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Afreen's avatar

You've written it so well and your voice is literally complementing it so beautifully!! 🤌

Ritika's avatar

I'm glad the essence of poem reached you. Thank you for your lovely comment and compliment. ❤🙌🙈

Abhishek Singh's avatar

you won't believe but I wrote something very similar. at least the starting was similar.

as usual bahut umda likhi h kavita :)

Ritika's avatar

Is it? Then would love you read your side as well.

Thanks a lot for the appreciation. ☺🙏

Abhishek Singh's avatar

wo thoda mushkil hoga. kavita to jiske liye likhi thi, usne padh li. mere liye kaafi h :)

Shubham Upman's avatar

Waah Ritika! Kya likha hai. So sad yet beautiful. I like how the guy even upon loosing his lady love, is somehow happy for her happiness.

So good that I had to listen it thrice! Amazing narration and delivery. You have a wonderful voice!!

Ritika's avatar

Thanks a lot Shubham! I'm grateful for your constant love and support. It means a lot. ❤🙌🤗🙈

Naira lune ✨'s avatar

Bohot khubsurat likha hai di ! ✨🫶🏻💌🥹🤌🏻

Ritika's avatar

Thanks a lot Cutie! 🤗☺❤

Abhilasha Thakur's avatar

मैं सम्पूर्ण हूं स्वयं में, 🌻