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Partheshwar's avatar

Bahut sundar rachna hai!! just a polite query- घुन्जता खामोश था।, I could not understand what does it mean? google baba bhi fail ho gye!!

Ritika's avatar

Thank you Partheshwar !!! It means that because of the deal both are in sock, so much silence outside but inside there are so many voices of fear. Sometimes we become silent but out from inside we a lot voices keep bothering us.

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🙏🙏

Naira lune ✨'s avatar

Bohot khubsurat likha hai di 🤌🏻✨🫶🏻🥹

Ritika's avatar

Thank You So Much Sweetie ❤

Naira lune ✨'s avatar

My pleasure always !! ✨💌❣️

Ayush Kashyap's avatar

I dont understand a lot of hindi here I guess I should read hindi more😭.

But this was so beautiful like dosto ke sath sham wali chai jesa🤌🏻

Ritika's avatar

Thank you for such a sweet complement. If you didn't get anything let me know. I'm so glad you liked it. 😎☺😊

Ameliorating A's avatar

Yerrr.. bahut sundar thi yar yeh kavita. Mujhe aasman related sab kuch pasand par yeh kavita toh aur bhi sundar thi.

Just stunning.

I loved it soo much 💖💖✨✨

Ritika's avatar

Aww Cutie!!!

Thank you for so much love and appreciation. Gratitude 🩷🩵🩶

Ameliorating A's avatar

It's absolutely my pleasure 🫂💖

Shubham Upman's avatar

Itna pyaara like hai kya bataon!

"अंधेरी ओढ़नी मे" — 🫡🤌

I enjoyed it, especially the ending stanza.

Ritika's avatar

Thank You Shubham! I'm glad you enjoyed reading this piece. I composed this while seeing sunrise today. ❤

Shubham Upman's avatar

*likha

Afreen's avatar

Very beautifully written dii..🤌🤌

Ritika's avatar

Thank you Afreen !!🫶🌻